Very nice. Familiar feeling too ^^

Your explanation scares me ever so slightly.

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.

Oh Jesus! I can feel the jealousness spilling out of my big fat fish heart. I can't write poetry. I just can't! No matter how hard I try, I end up with stupid poems about eyes. Just thinking about my eye poems just make me very very embarrassed... Oh well...I guess I don't really have time for jealousy since I am haunted by the fear for being eaten by stupid human beings who just LOVE eating fish. I mean, seriously, I'm an ugly fish and the seaweed get more attention than me, so why can't those stupid human beings just LEAVE ME ALONE? Human beings are sooooo cruel! They even made that pathetic movie called Nemo! That movie scared the hell out of me! Human beings are bad! All they do is eat seafood! It's not fair! Why can't they eat chipmunks instead?

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roar.
All you need is some ice-cream and a HUG!

Thanks
and thanks for the fave as well.

Now why would it do that? =\

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joyceWRECKAGE;;

The movie's called FINDING Nemo, dear dumb shit.
Chipmunk meat is tough, I think.

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joyceWRECKAGE;;

Why does everyone think I'm dumb? *sob* Just because I'm blonde, it doesn't mean I don't have a brain! *sob*
OK. I'll stop. It's just that we've been doing that blonde thing recently. So, yeah.
If it's tough, maybe they can suck on the blood or something.

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roar.
All you need is some ice-cream and a HUG!

Very much welcome ^^

And I think it was the jump between people making me dizzy @-@

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The way I see it, you have three choices. You can sink, you can swim, or you can develop a set of gills. Personally, I'd be most impressed by that last one.

I'm going to kill you so hard you will die to death.

Ahah.

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joyceWRECKAGE;;

You're a blonde fish?
Mmm, good idea.
-goes to suck chipmunk blood-

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joyceWRECKAGE;;

Certainly....

I love this one, for it's simplicity. I don't know if there's a need to expand it as the message comes across quite nicely through these eight lines.

Would "and will never come back" work better as the last line? It has to many syllables, but... hmm... (can't explain, given my lack of formal knowledge of poetry except for the wikipedia entry you linked me to a couple of weeks back, I can only judge based on feeling...)